Star Spider 2

11th Mar 2009, 12:00 AM

Star Spider 2
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Golden Dragon Girl on 10th Mar 2009, 7:00 PM

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XD Somehow I imagine the K'azari language having a cadence similar to the different dialects of Spanish. (Also its sentence structure is backward relative to English.)

This was a little rushed toward the end, so the dialogue may have a few mistakes. XP Although I just looked it over and there doesn't seem to be (besides the one place with too many spaces. XP).

Danel tells these people that he's writing a book, which isn't a total lie because that's probably what he plans to do when his military term is up.

That stripper is a dame after my own heart, I gotta say.



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