The Siege of Feralis Page 2

29th May 2009, 12:00 AM

The Siege of Feralis Page 2
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Golden Dragon Girl on 28th May 2009, 7:00 PM

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One of the challenges of this particular storyline for me is that it's almost entirely in Ashla rather than English (Liion occasionally pulls out some English just to show he's been paying attention in class, but that hardly counts.) And I have messed up several places in these two pages, sometimes grammatically, but here mostly by spelling things wrong.

I have no idea how the heck I managed to misspell some of this stuff, because I've been mainly doing cut and pasting from my wordbank.

"Vihiichiafu" in the second panel is totally wrong; it's supposed to be "vihiiciafu," no second "h". This is the only one I find important enough to mention, because "hiicia" is the word for "hiss" in Ashla and it's actually supposed to sound like hissing. Rar.

Anyway, that's what I get for rushing through dialogue for these, I suppose.



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